Comments on: What do you think of my story so far? Truthfull.? http://www.thunderinokc.com/led-wall-clocks/what-do-you-think-of-my-story-so-far-truthfull Find The Best Wall Clocks Online Fri, 29 Apr 2011 05:42:59 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.1.1 By: Edella http://www.thunderinokc.com/led-wall-clocks/what-do-you-think-of-my-story-so-far-truthfull/comment-page-1#comment-856 Edella Sun, 22 Nov 2009 10:39:59 +0000 http://www.thunderinokc.com/led-wall-clocks/what-do-you-think-of-my-story-so-far-truthfull#comment-856 It is good, but it made me sad and was emotionally difficult for me to read it. Cancer is a touchy subject for me. Any way, it was good, but it would be better if it was edited more, it got confusing to read at some points, but good job!<br><b>References : </b><br> It is good, but it made me sad and was emotionally difficult for me to read it. Cancer is a touchy subject for me. Any way, it was good, but it would be better if it was edited more, it got confusing to read at some points, but good job!
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]]> By: Shawna Monique http://www.thunderinokc.com/led-wall-clocks/what-do-you-think-of-my-story-so-far-truthfull/comment-page-1#comment-855 Shawna Monique Sun, 22 Nov 2009 10:23:59 +0000 http://www.thunderinokc.com/led-wall-clocks/what-do-you-think-of-my-story-so-far-truthfull#comment-855 Truthfully? It has potential. It's not perfect but with a little work it will be a good read. =}D Help me with mine anyone?<br><b>References : </b><br>http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index?qid=20090709173641AAs40fZ&r=w Truthfully? It has potential. It’s not perfect but with a little work it will be a good read. =}D

Help me with mine anyone?
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]]> By: TwilightGal http://www.thunderinokc.com/led-wall-clocks/what-do-you-think-of-my-story-so-far-truthfull/comment-page-1#comment-854 TwilightGal Sun, 22 Nov 2009 10:02:59 +0000 http://www.thunderinokc.com/led-wall-clocks/what-do-you-think-of-my-story-so-far-truthfull#comment-854 Ya I like it but I did get a little confused as of who was following the doctor in the second part but I figured it out more in the middle lol.... ok but it was good<br><b>References : </b><br> Ya I like it but I did get a little confused as of who was following the doctor in the second part but I figured it out more in the middle lol…. ok but it was good
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]]> By: Joe B http://www.thunderinokc.com/led-wall-clocks/what-do-you-think-of-my-story-so-far-truthfull/comment-page-1#comment-853 Joe B Sun, 22 Nov 2009 09:34:59 +0000 http://www.thunderinokc.com/led-wall-clocks/what-do-you-think-of-my-story-so-far-truthfull#comment-853 What media are you writing for? Screen play? Novel?<br><b>References : </b><br> What media are you writing for? Screen play? Novel?
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